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SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV
Intwentyyearsago,EveryonewoulddothattheywatchedspringfestivalgalaoncctvatafternoononNewyear’seve.buttwentyyearslater,asoursocietyofmaterialproseritygoes,computer,telephoneandtvarise.watchingspringfestivalcalaoncctvonNewyear’seveisnottheonlychoiceforus.soit’sadebateaboutifweshouldwatchspringfestivalcalaoncctvonNewyear’seve.
Facingthistrend,somepeopleholdapositiveattitudethatwatchingspringfestivalgalaoncctvisatadition.itbecomesasweatmemoryinmostofpeopleontheirheart.buttherearesomepeoplewhoinsistthattheywanttocancelwatchingspringfestivalgalaoncctvonNewyear’seve,becauseofouting.
AsfarasI’amconcerned,cancelingspringfestivalgalaoncctvisnotwise.withoutspringfestivalgalaoncctv,itmeansforgetingmemoryandtradition.Incontradition,whenyouwithyourfamilytowatchspringfestivalgalaoncctv,youwillbehappytotalkit.Asknowingspringfestivalgalaoncctvstepbystep,youwillfallinlovewithit.