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托福作文求狠拍!下周日就考试了,求大侠们指点了!Agreeordisagree,it’smoreimportantforgovernmenttospendmoneyonmodernhousesthanbuildingtraditionalorhistoricalbuildingorhomes.Whenitcomestotopicthatwhethergovern
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托福作文求狠拍!下周日就考试了,求大侠们指点了!

Agreeordisagree,it’smore

importantforgovernmenttospendmoneyonmodernhousesthanbuildingtraditional

orhistoricalbuildingorhomes.

Whenitcomestotopicthatwhether

governmentshouldinvestfundsonmodernhousesotherthantraditionalor

historicalconstructions,opinionmayvaryfrompersontoperson.Thereexists

astrongvoicesupportingthemodernhouseduetoitsconvenientefficient.

Whereas,somepeoplearefavorofthehistoricalbuildingsbecauseoftheyare

abletorevealacity’suniquecharacter.Forme,itisbettertofinda

balancebetweenthemodernizationandconservationoftraditionasweas

history.

Initially,weshouldaccepttheirreversible

trendofmodernizationarebringingessentialchangestotheworld.Withtherapid

developmentoftechnology,peoplenowcanputtheirinnovativeideaintoreality.

Thus,wewitnessmoreandmoreskyscrapersstandingout,almostallpublic

buildingsareequippedwithhigh-techdevices,andourhomesarebecomingmoreconvenient

withthe24hourshotwaterandautomaticairconditions.Consequently,people

havealreadybenefitedalotfromthemodernbuildings,andtheycannotlivein

theold-stylehousesanymore.Consider,ifyouarerequiredtoliveinahouse

withoutelectricity.NoTV,nocomputer,notelephone,noanyotherelectronicdevices,

howlongcanyouendure?

However,thoughgovernmentneedstospendmoneyonthe

up-to-datebuildings,theyalsoneedtopayattentiontothetraditionaland

historicalbuildingswhichcontaincultural,aestheticandotherpotential

values.Letputourdiscussionintoamorepracticalway.Currently,itis

commonthatmanycitiesareconstructingorplanningtoconstructtraditional

buildings.Bydoingso,theseplacescannotonlyconservetheirtraditionand

historicalcharacters,butalsosubsequentlyattractmoretouriststotravel

there,thatcanbeaimpetustothelocaleconomy.Inshort,itisnecessaryfor

governmenttosp

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  朋友,你写的思路不错,比较清晰,但是,你跑题了,绝对跑题了.题目是DoyouAgreeorDisagree.你的回答是没有包含在其中,所以跑题了.你的写法是适用于另一类题目:Somepeoplethink……whileothersthink……WhatD...
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