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菜鸟写了个短文请语法高手分析下～我写了个短文请语法高手分析下帮改下看那有不对的地方吗?Ilikereadinginmysparetime.Becausethereadingbookhasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,Icanlearnalotofknowledge
更新时间：2024-04-27 22:23:40
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菜鸟写了个短文请语法高手分析下～
我写了个短文请语法高手分析下帮改下看那有不对的地方吗?Ilikereadinginmysparetime.Becausethereadingbookhasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,Icanlearnalotofknowledgeofsuchknowledgeinlifeisnoteasyexperience.Forexample,someofthegeographicareasveryfar,wehavelearnedthroughreadingcanbe.readinghistorybookwecouldfindourselvesbacktoseveralhundredyearsago.Tounderstandthattimeoflife.Thesecondreadingtotempermyeloquence.Eloquenceonlygoodforthefutureworkandlifeareveryhelpful.Thethirdreadingisgenerallynotfeeltired.Unlikeotherhobbiesmayalsobeaffected.Inshort,Ilikereadinginthesparetime.
刘振字回答：
I'dlovetoreadwhenIhavesparetimebecauseoftheadvantagesitbringstome.Forinstance(例如）,Icanlearnalotofknowledgethroughreadingratherthanexperiencing;there'snotimeorspacelimits-soIcantraveltoanygeographicareaswhichI'minterestedin.
Wecanalwayslearnlessonswhenwearereading.Evenwecangobacktohundredsofyearsagotoseetheirculture,language,andsoforth.
Thesecondreasonforreadingistostrengthenmyeloquence.Peopletendtobeextensiveinknowledge;it'salwaysimportantforourfuture-whetherforourjobordailylife.Unlikeotherhobbies,readingisarelax.Sometimeswecanhideourselvesawayfromourrealworldandtoenjoy.
Toconclude,readingissomuchimportant,Ilovereading.Themostimportantthingistobreathe,thenistoread.
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